When Fuuko says "I'm fine with being your number two girl if you want" on the last page.

You can see in on Hinayu's Twitter that someone replies with this exact same sentence, which this person is Fuuko.

The very first page has an implied sex scene, featuring an unfamiliar black bra, Fuuko's book, and Yuni's phone. Just throwing it out there. (Not sure what the star and moon shaped jewelry means though.) It looks more than just symbolism, compared to the melodramatic threesome on the title spread. But I would love a good surprise.

I'm all fairness, I don't think the black bra is unfamiliar on the first page, because on the cover art it shows Nanase wearing the black bra or Yuni in other images. Though this image also implies a sex scene.

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Just as interesting as I was expecting from Kiyoko sensei

That's also part of the problem, yeah communication problems exist irl, but it's frustrating when authors exaggerate a lack of communication to absurd degrees and all because the series continuing entirely hinges on that concept. I know some people love it, but for me while a series with many communication issues can still be fun...it often doesn't feel like good writing when communication issues are repeatedly used to drag out issues and stretch the story. The characters could communicate, still have character flaws and personality problems, and then drama comes from that. I think it would at least be better than an absurd lack of communication.

I totally get whatcha mean. Sometimes it can just be too much, it breaks the suspension of disbelief... though I DO think people can really be THAT bad with communication sometimes lol

I also wanna note, the art in this is really nice. I like this artist's style.

I really love this author. I hope this title will not end like "Luminous=Blue", i.e rushed.

Looked at the author's other works. Not really expecting much of anything out of this

Good art, if a bit too sensual for the story. The writing so far is... frustrating, though

That's also part of the problem, yeah communication problems exist irl, but it's frustrating when authors exaggerate a lack of communication to absurd degrees and all because the series continuing entirely hinges on that concept. I know some people love it, but for me while a series with many communication issues can still be fun...it often doesn't feel like good writing when communication issues are repeatedly used to drag out issues and stretch the story. The characters could communicate, still have character flaws and personality problems, and then drama comes from that. I think it would at least be better than an absurd lack of communication.

I totally get whatcha mean. Sometimes it can just be too much, it breaks the suspension of disbelief... though I DO think people can really be THAT bad with communication sometimes lol

I also wanna note, the art in this is really nice. I like this artist's style.

Haha yeah sometimes people are bafflingly bad at just saying what's on their mind to the people that they love. Still I just hope the author doesn't entirely rely on a lack of communication for the whole story.

Yuni sus

When Fuuko says "I'm fine with being your number two girl if you want" on the last page.

You can see in on Hinayu's Twitter that someone replies with this exact same sentence, which this person is Fuuko.

Hehe yeah I noticed. I wonder if Fuuko has some fetish about cheating or ntr and wants to have an affair with Yuni while Yuni keeps dating Natsume.

Please talk properly with your girlfriend first. If you want her to change, talking is an option!

I'm all for it.

I don't really like it. Will read a few chapters more tho to see if i should drop it or not lol

Interesting, I hope this doesn’t end in a polyamory because I’m not liking the actual girlfriend so far... but that might change in the future.

Do these girls have no sense of self respect?? god that kinda hurt to read, but I like this!!

Good start, looking forward more :))

And the award for the recent most awkward dialogue writing goes to .... Kiyoko Iwami, and by a landslide at that. Congratulations once again.

Ok this one got my attention. I hope more soon

i cant take ntr (° -°)

I usually don't care for cheating tropes but honestly, her relationship with Nanase looks so dysfunctional already this is just accelerating the inevitable.

True, but why not just break up and go out with fuuko.
And the cover art seems like poly.

yes

What is the point of having a secret alt account so people don't recognize you if you post pics of yourself with very poor placed stickers?

Well, Accounts without the real name are hard to find.

I'm a ntr person, for real, but for some reason I'm not into cheating, I wonder why tbh

I'm a ntr person, for real, but for some reason I'm not into cheating, I wonder why tbh

I dont really understand the difference? Is it only ntr if it's done with the third person's knowledge or witnessing of the event?

gross

Mmm truly thought provoking stuff here folks.

Didn't realise it needed explanation that justifying cheating is disgusting (front page - "I would never have done it if you had just said I was cute that day"), figured most people could work that out on their own. Interesting that you didn't make a "truly thought-provoking" retort to any of the not-thought-provoking, short comments praising it. Does a comment need to be thought-provoking to be made? Or are you just using that as an excuse to say that criticism isn't allowed?

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